Hi everyone ... here is seven paragraphs from the first book of The Dusk Chronicles, Through the Door to Dusk. I hope you enjoy them and yearn for more!
As Noah drove home that night, he couldn't get the image of her out of his mind. He was drawn to he. There was a power that wouldn't let go of him and the more he tried not to think about her, the more he couldn't stop. He had to know her, to speak to her, to hold her hand and gently kiss her lips. What was this emotion that gripped him? It felt as if a vice had clamped down with all its might on his heart and wouldn't, no, couldn't let him shake free. He had to go back.
The next night he
got there early and decided to wait by the church construction,
hoping he could get a better view of where they came from. He was
convinced there had to be a hidden entrance into the area that he and
Travis had missed the night before. This time he would be ready. He
didn't want to frighten her, he just wanted to talk to her and find
out who they were and if they had known the boy he had watched die.
He was hoping they could give him some information or even an
explanation, anything that could help him understand what had
happened.
Again the
temperature had dropped and he began to shiver. That was when he
heard them. Impossible. He was looking at the doorway to the front of
the church. He didn't see them come from anywhere. They just
appeared right in front of him. He stayed very quiet and still and
waited to see where they were headed. Again they set out toward the
school. He followed, watching as they went into the cafeteria, but
this time he didn't stay. He went back to the church and waited for
their return.
After a few minutes
he could hear them coming up the block. When they went through the
fence opening he stepped out in front of them. They all stopped,
frozen in place as if they were suddenly made of stone. Their eyes
were fixed on Noah with an intensity of fear that he felt pierce
through is whole body. He no longer felt the crispness of the cold
air and the emptiness of the darkness that was quickly covering
everything around him. He moved forward towards them and as he did
they all backed away except for her. She stood directly in front of
him. Her green eyes looked even deeper close up and her skin was as
smooth as porcelain. She watched him intensely as he took another
step closer.
”Don’t be
afraid, I won’t hurt you. My name is Noah and I just want to ask
you a few questions. What’s your name?”
She looked into his
eyes. Noah could see she was different. She wasn't afraid, no her
eyes were kind and gentle. He wanted to grab her and take her into
his arms. He ached to feel his lips touch hers and feel the warmth
from her body melt into his.
”Please you do not
understand, we must go and you must not get in our way. Please step
aside. This is not your concern.”
Love his gentleness...and Noah happens to be a favorite name of mine for a man.
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Nice setup...can't wait to see more. Thanks for sharing.
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